Comic 217 - Break Up - Part II - Page 3

21st Jun 2010, 11:41 AM
Break Up - Part II - Page 3
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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fingerwitch 21st Jun 2010, 11:41 AM edit delete
And continues to get worse.


Effigy_Power 21st Jun 2010, 2:31 PM edit delete reply
Wow... it's like out of a great romance novel.

PS: It's not that bad, but yes, you can do it better, as we've seen before. But hey, we've all been there.
fingerwitch 21st Jun 2010, 2:48 PM edit delete reply
"The wind whipped through his chestnut hair as he stood on the cliff, gazing out over the angry grey sea, awaiting for his love's return.

"'Jocelyn' he whispered gently, his hushed tones recalling passionate nights behind the stables, the rough straw scratching against his soft, pallid skin.

"Just then he heard her voice, echoing across the moors all the way from the decaying old farm house where she sat by her husband's bedside, watching the old man slowly succumb to fever and madness, calling out to her once lover, 'the fuck you want?'"

... I have never read a romance novel but I gather that is how they are written.
Shaman 22nd Jun 2010, 2:42 AM edit delete reply
What? No black eye??? I'm so dissapointed.

Fwitch- Seriously... what you just wrote there... that really got to me. You got me so wet, OMG!!! :))
fingerwitch 22nd Jun 2010, 11:00 AM edit delete reply
You should read my actual porn...
Shaman 23rd Jun 2010, 8:59 AM edit delete reply
Awesome! Do you act it out on tape afterwards? :)
fingerwitch 23rd Jun 2010, 11:24 AM edit delete reply
No, I just read it out loud in Ian McKellan's voice.
Shaman 28th Jun 2010, 5:30 AM edit delete reply
Kink....kiiieeee... :P