Comic 214 - Break Up - Part I - Page 4

14th Jun 2010, 12:31 PM
Break Up - Part I - Page 4
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fingerwitch 14th Jun 2010, 12:31 PM edit delete
First page.

I have two problems with this page. First, Joss' expression should be on the annoyed side rather than amused. Second, Lee's dialogue in the first panel should be along the lines of "and then I walked into a stop sign on the way over here", making the black eye have nothing much to do with his breaking up with Marie. I don't know why I drew him with a black eye, I guess I wanted him to have a visible injury for Joss to ignore and yet I didn't want to show Marie punching him in the face.

NOW, at the bottom of this seemingly endless 'authour comment' comes a somewhat important announcement - due to the fact that I have really been struggling to produce two comics a week and making a somewhat less than satisfactory product, I will be doing OFaS only once per week from now until I am finished the project I am working on for an upcoming anthology, hopefully by the end of July but no later than the first week of August.

Thank you for your patience.

EDIT: wow, 'seemingly endless' is not as long as it used to be. I just get bored quickly I guess.


Effigy_Power 14th Jun 2010, 1:39 PM edit delete reply
Considering you update more than one page at a time anyways, once a week seems good, takes the load off.
Oh, and yeah, get working on that Anthology! And don't let your new baby-goat distract you!
fingerwitch 14th Jun 2010, 2:03 PM edit delete reply
Shaman 15th Jun 2010, 4:48 AM edit delete reply
Totally understandable. And like Effy says, with more than one page per update, it doesn't matter how many times or on which day of the week you specifically update. I quite enjoy the surpise chapter when it pops up ;)

fingerwitch 15th Jun 2010, 10:28 AM edit delete reply
I'm glad to know somebody feels that way, even if it is a random stranger on the internets.

EDIT: that came off a lot more sad and desperate than I had intended. I was trying to be funny and endearing.
Shaman 16th Jun 2010, 6:35 AM edit delete reply
Sad and desperate turns me on... But then so does funny and endearing... And crushed beer cans around an undone bed.
fingerwitch 16th Jun 2010, 1:06 PM edit delete reply
I'm trying to think of a sarcastic reply to that but nothing's popping up. Ah well.